Crit-on-Crit
4.5.11
It really helped me to hear all of the advice everyone gave me last week. Jill's suggestion to see some Maya Deren films definitely inspired me. I think it's a lot closer to how I envisioned it, and I feel like it's ambiguity is what makes it stronger. I tried my best to fix the sound, but now I think the volume might be too low! It was pretty hard for me to judge. I went all out and cut it down from probably about 7 minutes or so to less than 3! I hope this was for the better. I still can't think of a title for it, I hope that isn't a bad thing . . . Oh, and I did agree with what everyone said as far as I'm aware. I felt similarly only I couldn't put my finger on what was wrong, so I'm glad that everyone was able to help me out!
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